Kevin J Smith

Shadows at Home

A Story of Resilience

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Produktbeschreibung

This is a beautifully poignant story that captures the struggles and resilience of a young girl growing up in a difficult home environment. The narrative's structure provides a balanced mix of hardship and hope, which makes it both heart-wrenching and inspiring. Here are a few thoughts and suggestions for refining or expanding the story:Strengths:Realistic Portrayal: The relationship dynamics, particularly between Mia and Carla, feel authentic. Carla's dual role as a loving yet chaotic figure resonates deeply. Character Growth: Mia's journey from silent suffering to finding her voice and pursuing her passion is inspiring. Themes of Hope and Support: Introducing support systems like Mrs. Carter and Ms. Alvarez highlights the importance of community and mentorship. Suggestions:Deeper Exploration of Carla's Struggle: Consider adding a chapter or moments from Carla's perspective. This could provide depth to her character and show her internal battle with addiction and guilt. Develop Danny's Role: Since Danny is a central part of Mia's motivation, fleshing out his character could make the stakes feel higher. For example, include a moment where Mia has to protect Danny from a particularly chaotic situation. Art as an Anchor: Mia's art is a pivotal part of her identity. Perhaps include a description of the piece she submitted to the contest or a scene where she explains what her art means to her. Resolution with Ambiguity: The conclusion is fittingly open-ended, but you could hint at Carla taking small steps toward recovery, such as attending her first support meeting or apologizing more explicitly. Symbolism of Shadows and Light: Expand on the metaphor of shadows and light throughout the story, tying it into Mia's art or a significant moment of realization.

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Produktdetails

• Verlag: Smith Publishing
• Seitenzahl: 32
• Erscheinungstermin: 27. November 2024
• Englisch
• Abmessung: 235mm x 157mm x 7mm
• Gewicht: 235g
• ISBN-13: 9798330625161
• Artikelnr.: 72516729

Autorenporträt

Kevin Smith Jr., born on March 3, 1994, in Breaux Bridge, Louisiana, is a dedicated family man and baseball enthusiast. He is married to Heather Smith from Scott, and together they have four boys who share their father's passion for baseball. Kevin's life revolves around his family and the love for the game, fostering a supportive and active environment for his sons. Known for his commitment to his loved ones and his community, Kevin is a proud husband and father, deeply rooted in his Louisiana heritage.